9.29.2009

Poem, Discovered.

I wrote the following poem in the Coeur d'Alene Library some months ago. I just now stumbled upon it on my computer, and am both taken by it and doubtful as to its poetic merits.

Today, in the Library

I smiled at a reader,
who was frowning at a baby,
who was wailing inconsolably.

6 comments:

Andrew Bailey said...

Say more about that.

Anastasia said...

It bothers me that the headline of your blog is "Jonathan Charles Wright's Blog."

Which is not a sentence.

mclark said...

corie's got a good point. if you took away the period, it would be okay.

Lindsey said...

I like the period. We should use periods whenever possible, appropriate or not.

.

See? Doesn't that feel good?

brianna. said...

i like that IN corie's critique, she writes "Which is not a sentence."

Which is irony.

Anastasia said...

I like how supportive my friends are